Mrs Bolter

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There was something nice about this. It established the main character and storyline quickly and although the twist at the end was predictable, I somehow didn't mind. I liked the jungle dinosaur scene and am glad you did it the way you did rather than trying to show dinosaurs. The Jack The Ripper scene was great, It really captured an old England Ripper feel. I wonder if you will get away with the fact that technically, Morgan wasn't a liar though? Maybe a bit of an oversight to get the twist in but hey, you guys made it onto my voting slip.