liamthelion

About me: 
I enjoy making films :) This year my team and I created a film called 'Strike!' By Pernoctation Productions. It is Heat 4 in Dunedin. I would hugely appreciate any feedback on it. Here the movie... http://www.48hours.co.nz/screening-room/2014/dunedin/strike/ :)

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I loved this film. Well done. Great acting, editing, cinematography, and directing. The only negative comment that I would make, although I know it was the effect you were going for, I was left unsatisfied with the ending. I JUST REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO MORGAN! :) Also, I feel the plot lingered a little too long in the middle. Apart from that, fantastic job! It is a mystery to me why you didn't make the finals this year.

Sadly, we haven't got any reviews on our film yet, so if you could review it, That would be hugely appreciated.............

Our film...
http://bit.ly/Pvh2o3

Our reviewing page...
http://bit.ly/Pvh939

THANKS HEAPS AND WELL DONE :))

Good use of cinematography and effects. I love the music, acting and plot. There were just a few things that could have been fixed up in post (i.e. transaction between scenes). But other than that, I really enjoyed it. Good job :))

Sadly, we haven't got any reviews on our film yet, so if you could review it, That would be greatly appreciated.

Our film...
http://bit.ly/Pvh2o3

Our reviewing page...
http://bit.ly/Pvh939

THANKS HEAPS AND WELL DONE :))

Good use of editing and cinematography. There were a few things that could have been fixed up in post (i.e. audio was sometimes too loud or too soft), sometimes the plot was a bit confusing and I didn't really understand 'The Shocking Ending'. Apart from that, Well Done :)

My team and I are also a school team, but sadly, we haven't got any reviews on our film yet, so if you could review it, that would be hugely appreciated...........

Our film...
http://bit.ly/Pvh2o3

Our reviewing page...
http://bit.ly/Pvh939

THANKS HEAPS AND WELL DONE :))

Haha, well done. I loved it. Great use of humor, cinematography, and editing. Fantastic use of dialogue.Very...... creative plot? Some bits just dragged on a bit too long, the plot lacked a bit and sometimes the background music was louder than the audio. But other than that, well done :) If I was a judge I would give it 'Best Title Sequence', 'Best Use of Dialogue' and 'The Peter Jackson Wild Card' (because it is the weirdest film I have seen this year) :)

Sadly, we haven't got any reviews on our film yet, so if you could review it, That would be greatly appreciated. Our film... http://bit.ly/Pvh2o3 Our reviewing page... http://bit.ly/Pvh939 THANKS HEAPS AND WELL DONE :))

Good use of cinematography and camera angles. Great use of humor (I love the mental Morgan). The use of foley would have helped in some scenes and a few things could have been fixed up in post. Good job :) We also used the track 'Serial Killer Selfie' from Big Bang & Fuzz in our film. If you could review it, That would be greatly appreciated. Our film... http://bit.ly/Pvh2o3 Our reviewing page... http://bit.ly/Pvh939 THANKS HEAPS AND WELL DONE :))

Nice message, good cinematography and good editing. The plot was lacking a bit, the audio was a bit quite and I'm not a big fan of cross fades. But good job :)

Very good use of humor and music. I really enjoyed it! A few thing could have been fixed up in post a bit better and the audio wasn't the best, but overall Very Well Done :)

Good use of music, piece of dialogue and character. I was a bit confused with the use of the prop, the plot was a jumbled at times, a few things could have been fixed up in post a bit better and some of the acting could have been improved a little bit. Very good considering age. Well Done :)

Well Done! I really enjoyed your film. Great plot. Good use of dialogue. Sometimes the audio was a bit jumbled and hard of hearing, and a few thing could have been fixed up in post a bit better, but apart from that great job :)

Great animation. The plot was lacking a bit and sometimes it was a bit hard to follow. Well Done :)

Good animation. Good music. Good......... imagination. Overall, Well Done? :)

WELL DONE! I can't believe you did that all by yourself! It was very amusing and humorous. Just at times you could see the shadow of the camera in the background and a few other technical hiccups. But overall, great job :)

Fantastic use of humor. Very amusing. At times the audio was a bit hard to hear and the plot was jumbled at times (but I expect that might have been for effect). Well Done :)

I liked the ball on the chain and great costumes. Sometimes the plot was a bit jumbled and a little bit too cheesy for my taste. The acting could of been improved a little bit. Well Done :)

Good use of music. Sometimes the audio was hard to hear. Good sock at the end and fantastic use of prop. Well Done :)

The story line was....... interesting? Really good use of humor and music. It was very entertaining. Well Done :)

Good use of humor and effects in post. I would suggest to improve the crop. Mostly at the beginning of the film you couldn't see the whole head. Well Done :)

Sometimes the story-line was a little hard to follow, odd sequence, good twist in the middle and nice use of piece of dialogue given. Well done :)