I really enjoyed this, as I am a big fan of puns. However, I think the story should have perhaps been kept a bit more simple. I think having the 'fad' be just about punning would have been awesome (but that's probably just me). The conversation starter adjudicator guy at the party was a great addition. Great script, overall - some pretty clever stuff!
The use of 'ex' bully meaning that he bullies his exes was just brilliant. I really enjoyed the performances by the two lead males but I thought some of the group scenes were a bit clunky.
I would have liked to have seen a less close-up shot of the moment where the male protagonist thinks he has the sword...then doesn't... but keeps trying to stab Bobby anyway. I just wanted to see more of that, because it was a great moment.
Costuming was pretty good, but I would have re-thought the use of the bonnets on the women indoors, as they hid their faces a lot and made things look a bit messy. Also, with the effort that went into costuming, I feel like some more effort should have been made with the hair of the girls, in particular.