Um did you guys watch the national winner from 2017? Because this was basically a replica of that story, only without the technical polish of Cool Story Bro Film. Young boy runs away from home and finds a homeless man under the bridge, who gives him advice about what things were like in his day. At least the runaway doesn't smoke yet. I would have rated this 3/7 or 4/7 but it was staggering in how much it tried to re-do the apee winner. Also my main piece of advice would be with your sound when you have a lot of background noise, such as from the motorway due to where you shot, to consider adding sound effects or dubbing over in post as the constant sound of car noise was very distracting.