A lot of stuff happening in here, and from what I could gather of the story, it seems like this team have a pretty good understanding of structure.
As other reviewers have said, the technical aspects of this film were pretty abysmal- out of focus shots, characters talking outside of the frame, audio was hard to hear.
These things are all way easier to get better at than storytelling, so fix up your technical side and you could find yourself making some killer movies!
TITLE REVIEW: We Spent Too Much Money on this Trip is a great title. I love it.