A woman is hunting bartenders.
Great start to this, with a montage of bloodied black body bags being disposed of and even burnt! When we move inside the bar (the most empty of bars) it all gets a bit lower in quality; especially with the story. It would have been great to see more variety with the shots and using the edit to ramp up the tension. It's also the little things - your "10 Bartenders Missing" looked more like a flyer than a news report - was that the intention? A decent enough effort that if it had sustained the opening would have really been on to something.