Fun premise, in a longer format this could be a great story. Quite a bit of steadycam going on, sometimes to great effect, sometimes kind of pointless but using what you've got is always a good idea so thats cool.
An interesting take on the 'wish film' but sadly the overuse of the gyro/st-cam was distracting.
I liked the concept, and the performances were fun. Its weird to say this in a five minute film, but I thought you could have cut about 30% of the chaff and made the film much tighter and, thus, more impactful.