It was a Piece of Cake

Average: 2.5 (2 votes)
Horror Comedy
Christchurch > 1

Our lead has a really bad day and things turn a little dark.

Your set-up worked well and I was impressed to see how you used a cellphone to good effect to light a night shot. I wish you'd been a little more creative with your use of the Wilhelm Scream as it felt rather shoe-horned in at the end. Nice drone shot too. Something to work on: Tighten up the edit as some shots go on a touch too long. And try to balance your sound levels.

As i sit here reviewing films. Unfortunately I can’t recall what the story was here. Which in effect is the best feedback i can give. Focus on telling a clear and simple story next year.