Our lead has a really bad day and things turn a little dark.
Your set-up worked well and I was impressed to see how you used a cellphone to good effect to light a night shot. I wish you'd been a little more creative with your use of the Wilhelm Scream as it felt rather shoe-horned in at the end. Nice drone shot too. Something to work on: Tighten up the edit as some shots go on a touch too long. And try to balance your sound levels.