Hi guys, please don't be offended. I got lost in your story. Rather the plot. In my mind I couldn't link the sequences together, though I think I know where you were trying to take it. Maybe? I appreciate your efforts. It's not that easy to complete something in the weekend and get all the hand in etc done on time. I hope you guys had fun making your short.
Not really sure what your film was about, but your team intro was hilarious!
This is one of those "I see what you were going for but I didn't really get it" kind of films. I mean, I do see what you were going for, but having said that, I didn't really get it.
Pretty ambitious and I can't fault you for trying!