Hi guys, please don't be offended. I got lost in your story. Rather the plot. In my mind I couldn't link the sequences together, though I think I know where you were trying to take it. Maybe? I appreciate your efforts. It's not that easy to complete something in the weekend and get all the hand in etc done on time. I hope you guys had fun making your short.
The Room
by Gourd Dam
This is one of those "I see what you were going for but I didn't really get it" kind of films. I mean, I do see what you were going for, but having said that, I didn't really get it.
Pretty ambitious and I can't fault you for trying!