Great take on time travel, great use of an old cell phone good character delevopment for such a short film and good rack focus, your audio mix was weak during an over the shoulder shot in the kitchen. But overall I ne of the strongest films of the heat
Two sisters/friends fight over breakfast; in fact they fight about most things. They travel back in time to try and fix some issues.
This was well acted, filmed and structured. However, there was a horrible buzz in the audio at one point and for future film-making you need to look at trying to maintain consistent audio levels as it shot around the place a bit. Also I'm pretty sure I could hear your lens when you were completing the rack focus. One of the more engaging films of the heat though so well done!
Good time travel idea. Good performances and banter between the leads too.