Two girls, in particular, find a guy quite appealing. Just what is it about him? Quite possibly his lovely jersey!
Filmed at Christ College, this nicely met the Rom-Com genre. The performances were good and some of the lines genuinely funny - "Sweet like a marshmallow on a summer day" for example. Your ending worked nicely too.
Next steps: Don't over process your audio - it sounded very robotic. And if your script calls for a school day - you really need more people there to make it feel authentic. Nice work!