Charlie Flowers is called out of retirement to find some kids who have been kidnapped.
OK, some good things happened during this. Clearly hit the genre, there was some solid acting and the news graphic was nicely done. Next steps: Improve your audio quality and mix. Some of the dialogue was hard to hear. Also, try to create a story that plays to your strengths of being a young cast. So often school teams play adult roles and while it's good fun it limits the realism of your film.