Slick cursed-typewriter type film within a film that had some nice comedic touches and an excellently acted hobo prepared to do anything for food. I liked how smooth some of your transitions were and the dialogue was good. I also commend that the genre was subverted, but unfortunately to me this was done at the expense of a coherent story.
Good production quality with some engaging cinematography, but it is ultimately let down by the story (or lack of...). Might of been better without the story-within-a-story trope. Unsatisfying ending. Some good acting and art department work too.
The sheer volume of content you managed to pack into the small time allowance was impressive! I found this film extremely engaging. A little foggy on the details but it wasn't enough to detract from the overall effect of the film.