Focus!!!! Need more focus. And that applies to the story too, not just the camera work, it wandered and was overlong. It would have been better edited down by a couple of minutes. I liked the idea of the radio dj talking to noone, and some of the big empty room scenes were evocative, especially the kitchen.
If your hero was actually trying to accomplish something, this could have been great, but it seemed he was just passing the time which unfortunately means all we were doing was passing time.
Metal Wizard applauds your camera work when walking up the hill on uneven terrain, surprisingly smooth.