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A new girl starts at school and joins a Shakespearian drama rehearsal. Something about fitting in and falling in love.
This was all a bit disjointed really with strange fade to blacks during some shots. It was also a bit noisy in the background during a couple of scenes making the dialogue hard to hear. The performance from the lead was good but there just wasn't enough story here for the cast to work with.
Great slow-motion ending.
The legitimacy of the love story between the two leads felt like it was lost somewhere
as I ended up being more confused than anything during this.
If you guys work through your workflow and come out swinging next year
you're bound to continue to improve.