'Jumping Redemption' by outBOX Studios

Team name: 
Film name: 
Jumping Redemption
Genre: 
Musical/Dance Movie
Heat: 
04
Average rating: 
1.0625
Your rating: None Average: 1.1 (8 votes)
5

Wonderful storyline and ideas.

4

A difficult genre to be sure. You pretty much got a lot of the conventions in terms of narrative but not enough of the stylistic conventions, in particular fast paced editing, costume, crazy angles and camera movement. Glad it was you and not me that got this genre though! Some good humour at times.

4

A difficult genre to be sure. You pretty much got a lot of the conventions in terms of narrative but not enough of the stylistic conventions, in particular fast paced editing, costume, crazy angles and camera movement. Glad it was you and not me that got this genre though! Some good humour at times.

2

Where do I start? Firstly the plot was fairly boring and the acting poorly executed. Despite it being a tough genre the film could have had a lot of improvements. Especially at the end where the dancer falls over. Whether that was intended to be funny it is unclear.

1

needed more of a story and the sound wasnt great

1

You really pulled the short straw with this one. Having arguably the hardest genre doesn't put you in for an easy winner and there really needed to be something to attract the audience and you didn't nail that at all with your "jumping" (I wasn't aware that was a dance).

1

Before I start, I would like to say that this has to be the worst 7 minutes of my life I spent watching such a poorly made film. The Audio needed the huge amounts of work done to it and the story-line had an opportunity to win my vote but was poorly executed.

The Cinematography needs complete replacement and some tracking shots to make the environment of an intense-sort of battle place for the dance-battle to be taken seriously. A bit of focal adjustments should add a bit of sophistication to some scenes. Take these tips into account for next year and I'm sure outBOX Studio's film will be just as equal as 'The Rise of Dogboy', in that sense; keep on trying. :)

2

Tough draw for 4 boys who can't dance. Nice new shoes though. Look at what others have done and reflect on things. Use it as learning experience and come back next year with the goal of improving on this years one. Hang in there.

1

Tough genre... not much more to say.